T3+Writing

 **__ Week 8 September 19th - September 23rd __**


 * An adverbial phrase is a group of words working together to do the same job as an adverb. **

WALT: recognise and use adverbial phrases in our writing. SC:We will know the following:
 * a noun
 * adjective
 * a verb
 * an adverb
 * what an adverbial phrase is


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   __//** Thursday 15th september **//__   S.C: 
 * Recall past events
 * Use personal pronouns
 * Has a introduction
 * Has a condusion
 * Is writtn in past tense
 * Has sequened in oder
 * Tell us what, when, why, were - Introduction personal comment.

Conjunctions to connect time (firstly, shortly, next) Adjectives - big Nouns - climbing wall verb - run

What**? out door ed camp**

 * When? Monday 5th september**
 * Were? Ngamuwahine**

**On Monday. Tramp, cook own meals, set up rooms, night walk, spotlight.**
**On Tuesday. Swimming, loop track, fire lighting, ABL, burma trail.**

**On Wednes day.** **Activity day 1, spotlight, possum hunting, swimming, bomb fire.**

**On Thursday. Activity day 2, spotlight, consert**

**On Friday. Clean up, eel, clash of the camp, scav hunt, HOME!**

 My Dream house....

My dream house has a chocolate fountain and a pool made of bouncy jelly with the pool 50 by 50 and 50 meters deep. With a 60 inch T.V in the bedroom (Master bedroom.) and a 300 inch T.V in the lounge. 2 volts fill of money and on e volt fill of laptops, PSP’s and Nintendo’s. A kitchen with 3 master chefs.   Thursday 25 August

W.A.L.T- Use range of language features to write descriptive stories.

The Hippo is a really fat hippo because it sit around like person trying to move a 50 meter concrete peace of rook. The hippo is smart like the people in Totara. He loves to solve puzzles. Then he herd a bang that mad him bonus up off the floor like a rabbit. When hit the floor his puzzle broke like if you dropped a laptop. He was so mad he got up and started to walk. He was faster then usually, before he was as slow as a snail and now he is faster then a snail. There was another bang and when he got to the souse of the bangs and sore that it was some people in a bull dowser and whacking the ground and when they sow him coming the ran for there life. Later on there was no banging.  <span style="background-color: transparent; display: block; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS'; font-size: medium;"> //<span style="background-color: transparent; display: block; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">I am really disappointed in this story. You need to check your spelling. i didn't really understand this story? it didn't really tell me a lot about the hippo. The first sentence confused me, which is the most important part of the story. // <span style="background-color: transparent; display: block; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS'; font-size: medium;"> <span style="background-color: transparent; display: block; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS'; font-size: medium;"> //<span style="background-color: transparent; display: block; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">next learning step // <span style="background-color: transparent; display: block; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS'; font-size: medium;"> //<span style="background-color: transparent; display: block; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Using language features effectively. If it wasn't as slow as a snail any more, what was it as fast as? // <span style="background-color: transparent; display: block; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS'; font-size: medium;"> //<span style="background-color: transparent; display: block; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Check your work make sure it makes sense. was he making a puzzle? what was he doing? why were they whacking the ground? // <span style="background-color: transparent; display: block; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS'; font-size: medium;"> //<span style="background-color: transparent; display: block; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Paint a picture, how does this story look in your mind? // <span style="background-color: transparent; display: block; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS'; font-size: medium;"> <span style="background-color: transparent; display: block; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS'; font-size: medium;"> //<span style="background-color: transparent; display: block; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Miss Connor // <span style="background-color: transparent; display: block; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS'; font-size: medium;"> <span style="background-color: transparent; display: block; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS'; font-size: medium;">